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PostSubject: A poem i wrote ...   March 26th 2008, 12:56 am

well here u go a poem that i wrote about palestine n how things been recently its a new poem n its called (A walk on the road) i hope u pplz like it n give me some feed back thnx alot for reading it all i know its too long Wink n i wrote it with no ryhme coz i realy wont pplz to concentrate on the meaning n the msg of it instead of the ryhme so am gonna stop talkin now n heres the poem ...

i walk on the street
ask me wat i see ...
wat do u see???
i see dead cold bodies layin on the bloody road
i see children with no souls
i see tears burns like fire from widows eyes
i see black sky covered with world's rage
i see human without bodies
i see a hand there n a leg overthere, body parts are everywhere ...
i see those empty bullets after they done wat they have to
i see men cryin like nobody cried before
i see people walkin with no faces
then lets take the next road,
no its all same places
i see myself laying there dead cold n covered with blood ...
its a crime against humanity n the committers arent human...
i see families sleepin in their home thinkin its safe but they thought wrong ...
why did they thought wrong???
because they could neva imagine such a crime...
families, children, women n men they were all murdered in this rootles night, oh its not just a night its day after day after another even in sunlight ...
and tell me does anybody care ...
does anybody Freakin care??
no why are u even askin ...
dont ask people for mercy ask god for it...
dont bow to no one god is the only one whose worth it...
so our mercyfull god bring us justice from those graves, bring us victory from those wounded souls.
if we had the power we wont kill women n children ...
those innocent souls have done nothing wrong except believing in hope ...
but am sayin it now neva say it again...
wat goes around comes around ...
those lost loved ones wont go to waste ...
so u heartless killing animals better watch ur back ..
this nation was raised on sucking the pain...
was raised on bleeding courage comin from our veins...
so my friend hold my hand lets walk on the road and burry those bodies ...
lets hold those cryin children n wipe their tears ...
say gdbye for the last time lets start all over ...
we salut u all couragous patriots god let their souls rest in peice n the heaven be their place ...

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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   March 26th 2008, 3:59 pm

thanx anonymous it's beautiful one
go ahead
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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   March 26th 2008, 4:00 pm

ur welcome thnx for readin it ...

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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   March 27th 2008, 10:53 am


THANX ALOTS GIRL
GOOD FEELING TELL US GOOD INTENTION FOR
THE GOOD LIFE>>>>>

THE CONTROLAR
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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   March 27th 2008, 11:54 am

oh thnx for ur comment i realy appreciate it ...

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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   March 30th 2008, 9:17 am

YR WORDS ARE IMPRESIVE
GOOD LUCK
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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   March 30th 2008, 10:24 am

thnx sea star so ulike paris hilton or wat?? Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   June 11th 2008, 12:53 am

it'a a wonderful words.. don't believe me Wink
VIVO PER LEI :d





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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   June 11th 2008, 6:26 pm

thnxXx Wink

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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   June 15th 2008, 10:13 am

.
Really these r perfect words from sensetive heart
Wallah I adore ur topics always
thnx 4 sharing us these beautiful words

BesT wisHes

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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   June 15th 2008, 8:22 pm

aww thnx alot miss pal. ur awsome Wink

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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   September 12th 2008, 5:09 am

Nice Words ..
Keep GoinG

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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   September 14th 2008, 11:04 pm

thank u well i see that ur screen name for the first time congats for bein a mod. Wink

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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   September 15th 2008, 6:48 am

Wink

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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   September 22nd 2008, 10:29 pm

Wow gurl ... wonderfull wordz ... keep up da Gd work hun ...

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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   September 22nd 2008, 11:32 pm

good one it reflects our situation in realltiy from occupation side and siege also but we do not give up and sometime we will get our freedom
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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   September 23rd 2008, 2:29 am

lalloosh ehab wrote:
Wow gurl ... wonderfull wordz ... keep up da Gd work hun ...

lolz thank u lalloosh :p

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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   September 23rd 2008, 2:30 am

[quote="sweetstar"]good one it reflects our situation in realltiy from occupation side and siege also but we do not give up and sometime we will get our freedom[/quote
oh well thnx for ur reply Smile]

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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   September 23rd 2008, 2:45 am

WoooW anonymous#1

really nice words and its all in our minds but mostly i really liked(wat goes around comes around ...)

cause really it does
enshallah we will get a better life .. but when !! .. when god wants it

best wishes .. DARK ANGEL

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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   September 23rd 2008, 3:21 am

That's True DARK ..

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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   September 23rd 2008, 10:38 am

Quote :
i see children with no souls
i see tears burns like fire from widows eyes


Mad pale Sad what i can say .. the words speak it self ..


thanks anonymous#1 for The great poem
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PostSubject: Re: A poem i wrote ...   September 23rd 2008, 3:31 pm

aww well thank u all am glad u liked it!! Smile
@dark angel well ofcourse payback day will come!!
@ahmed: thank u

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